Thursday, 11 February 2016

The Lost Island Structure

There they were in the middle of the sea, Sammy and Thomas. Getting ready to go to the lost island. The only way they could get there was in their big invisible boat. It was the size of a cruise. Sammy had been there before but he wanted to take Thomas.
They brought canoes to canoe there. When they got there they were surprised about the earthquake that hit them. Sammy didn’t know about this but they help the people there. Stored in their big ship, they gave food and water to the people and slept the night.

The first earthquake didn’t hurt anyone, but this second did not just hurt somebody but killed. It killed Thomas and everyone was in for a big nasty shock in the morning...
(visit my blog next week and you will get to see the rest)

4 comments:

  1. Talofa Lava Talita,
    I love how you've described the invisible boat which was the size of a cruise. I also love how you've included a lost island to you narrative writing.
    How do you come up with such good ideas?

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    1. Cause I have a great brain and I'll tell you the rest at school

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  2. Talofa Lava Talita,
    I love how you've described the invisible boat which was the size of a cruise. I also love how you've included a lost island to you narrative writing.
    How do you come up with such good ideas?

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    1. I told you the rest at school on the day after you wrote the comment and the day that I wrote my first reply

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