Sunday, 26 April 2015

Immersion Introduction (Term two)

WALT: Write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
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Introduction

Have you ever been handed food by a teacher, at assembly? During assembly this morning, if you were sitting up you could get food from teachers and prefects which they were making at the front of the stage. Read on to find out what else happened.
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This week in writing, we have been learning about writing a introduction with hook and orientation. One of our tasks was to mark somebody else introduction based on the rubric above. Venetia marked my introduction and I think that she marked my introduction with threes because it wasn't really really interesting, but it was interesting enough to get a three. I hoped you enjoyed this and make sure to keep visiting my blog!

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