River Talks

WALT: Write a detailed introduction with a hook and orientation.
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Introduction

Walking past Omaru Creek can be a bit of a nightmare. It’s time for you to know that our river (Omaru Creek) and what it needs to be a clean river for us to live around, and for the creatures to live in it. Why don’t you see if you can help?

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In writing for the last few weeks we have been learning about hooking an audience with an introduction. We have also been learning about that introduction does not tell what happen. Just like last week, we marked each others introduction and my partner was Rima. I hoped you enjoyed!